She woke up screaming..her shudders softened by the pillow...foundering in the preserving case of insensitiveness..,trying to exhale without a breath, she turned her back on the blunt vigorous emptiness,stared at the heavy dribble through the rain outside her window.It started getting into her nerves.., stunned,what miracle brought in here..she haven't seen rain forever,..Her thoughts moving torpidly,she stepped out into the slippery mizzle and fuddled through the rain..twisting through the trees,simply walking disguise for the pouring pure crystal's light,flying darkened clouds gathered to welcome her to the breathtaking glimpse of the vast emptied land..she responsively finding peace in the sound of the rhythm slapping the ground..enjoyed the music to her ears..while the happy leaves jumped off from the trees.
With the greetings from the wind,the cold rain dipped through her ruffled hair and dripped across her cheeks like fresh water tears..deep to the dying, to her thirsting heart,smelt the cold..feeling overwhelmed..she smiled so much that it hurted her cheeks.
The colorless curtains protecting her,watering the thirsty flowers,..washing all the dusts away,ceaseless spontaneous fall of its own heavy moisture, she skips on the puddles..and looks above,drops fallen from heaven splatts on her face,washing the sins and clearing her soul..the locked up and the none escaped,that everything remained, untouched and forgotten behind the rain..
Her heart beating instead the clock counting time,she tried to enjoy the wind against her face.Wandering between palms and bright blooms,huge droplets crumpled in the puddles with the small lakes in the uneven surface,she sang soaked while smiling and danced with the rain heartedly..
The eternity she was in started to fade away,a dizzying range of emotions shot through her in time.The clouds started snatching its belonging..the trees slowed the dance for the goodbye..the inevitable rain eventually broke up..undesirably she sneaked herself off from that moment,toweling herself and again on to bed..squeezing her innocent eyes shut..and the next thing she knew was,it was morning ,the end of the beautiful night..



38 comments:
i like the way ur expressing happiness now...u've really moved a step foward and have become what i always wanted from u...and the piece of writing is cool...take care..
oi girl.. You love the rain huh? Been long since it havent rained.. I remember the last time it rained.. Splashings.. Wow! You really got the skill of blogging.. *
@anon: what you wanted frm me??hehe..ok ok..so..um thank you..:)i'll try to improve my writing post by post hopefully...
@anon: oi anon..i do love rain..infect alot..yes ive been missing it badly...thts the reason why this post got due...cuz i wanted to get myself touched with it before i write this...but alas..its not gonna happen..maybe late this month..n haah...thank you:)
Dear both anonymous..i know you both know me...so please do write your names the next time you comment..i wouldnt eat you all..:)
loaaabi post eh dhonbish...thoughtful..keep it up dhoooonie
Well, well,whaddya know... you found out my secret hobby.
shadow runner you fucking psycho stop chasing her around sick fuck
@Somebody:Thank you bombish ;)thought is full...lots of posts on the way...
@The Shadowrunner:being in rain..?its one wonderful thing which makes me away frm every single another thing happening arnd..but i am upset tht its not yet greeting us..hehe..it surely is a wonderful secret hobby...cuz i even mostly sneak out for the rain..
@Anonymous:Shut up.Hes not chasing me..and i dont allow slang in my blog..
You should try it when the rain hits.
Put on a raincoat of the dark variety and just rush through the suddenly empty streets.
@anony: Can't stop me. :D
hey dear.. long time no c dho.. college ga maa busy dhuvas kolheh veema..
anyways.. this post reminds me of rain.. and now i gotta feel some water in ma body... i think i m gonna take a showr:P hehe
hey girl.. i like the way you express the feelings.. it sound so real.. nice one!!
vaareya boato kudhin kulhey naato :P kaalhu elhi mulhoato :P
nice post :) ... its a piece of happiness ...amazing piece of writing :) ... hehe :) and i love the rain toooo!!!! :)
i luv da rain tooo... da writing was so real...luv it :) gud work dear.. keep it up
@The Shadowrunner:.ahh!...have always loved to be touched with one of the best feeling....and nothing to come inbetween myself and it...no raincoat nor an umbrella..;)
@Mike Abraham:hehe....now this is vry unusual..i hope my this post doesn't let all my readers shower every time after reading this...haha..bll...;)
@PemPeNeyNo AnEsThEyShiYa:hehe...:) thats what i expected...cause i somehow wanted to put the reader's mind so much into it...for them to get the best feeling out of it...thank u dear..
@Iyash:oieeee...glad tht u love it ;)...cuz some people doesnt know how to appreciate it...or welcome it...they r just so feeble people...who rolls up blanket arnd themselves and curse the rain...
@anjelica:yeah..trying a new post...which is on the way...thank u sweets ;)
@anonymous: sorry i missed ur @ reply..
and yeah...thats a lullaby my mom used to sing to me when i slept...i remember...old times*sigh*
cool..ur so ganna be happy ..........
Hello
It has a nice blog.
Sorry not write more, but my English is bad writing.
A hug from my country, Portugal
creative..
My name is ajmal.i want to be your friend,you write very nice things..
@¢ u т є я ι ѕ α :i am happy my dear..thank you:)
@Luis Portugal: your english is not tht bad ..and its ok..m glad uve atleast said what you feel,thank you very much and a warm hug from maldives aswell :)
@ajmal:hehe...its the mind tht takes to read creative stuffs...and the mind could be more creative than the writing..i am everyone's friend..and thank you :)
heyyy star...a nice one..
i lurrv the rain..but its long time dho vaarey nuveheythaa..umm miss the rain...
thank you star. for making me feel the rain drops touching me. even though i m lying on my couch with my lap. wishing for the rain to hit my windows and bring n end to this warm days.
wonderful stream of thoughts. keep it up. God bless ya. ;)
beautiful!pristine!!keep blogging!!
My god such a complicated yet so beautiful expression....u sure u r 19 ???
My god u kept me mesmerized throughout the post..and believe me I wanted to touch the rain myself...
U kno it summer's onset here...and A post about the rain and emotions just moved my longing to thirst...
kudos.....
u r blogrolled ...........
Singamaraja reading your blogs
Truely hearted,u never miss even a drop of rain to love..do ya!
@swyt butterfly:yea it have been too long ever since it havent rained...but now the season started right...so you should be happy :)
@FETAL MIND:Ahh no thanking me!! hehe...but thank you for being keen on reading it with your thoughts and imagination..and i know it gives an awesome feeling...afterall its the rain :)
@ANWESA: yeppy and happy tht u appreciated :)
♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ :Ah!! theres no age to feel or love anything...and it gives me the high inspiration to write about whatever i love..and yes..m sure m 19 :)
dont worry...season's would greet again...hope for the best !
@singamaraja:keep on reading..*excited smile*
@anony: youve got to love everything around you to love yourself...to know that your living in the everything around you...
not to rain on your parade, but i believe you need to know how to use words before throwing them about.
a thesaurus is helpful when you know how to put words together but your prose would appear rather like a badly constructed building when you don't. one that threatens to fall on itself.
if you intend to become a decent writer you should obviously read a lot. there are plenty of good resources around, even on the internet. reading good magazines, journals and blogs as well as books will help further your writing ability.
best regards
@boob: well...to be honest...this place is where i write whatever i wish as how i feel...just simple feelings you know..but hah..i do believe tht there's an appropriate way of writing..
and i don't need any "thesaurus"..
i do read alot more than u can imagine...and i do take my reading's as an inspiration too...
but..this is nothing about writing with decency..
..its all about writing from heart..(you may not know what i meant...you've got to see things frm my eyes ...to know...)
but i gladly appreciate your advice..thank you.. :)
Thanks for stopping by my blog and your kind comment feel free to visit again.
Keep posting......
Thanks again for visiting my blog and your comment.
Cheers!
contrary to wat boob might ahve to say..i thought that was really well done...i totally understand coz i luv the rain so much myself...but u xpressed it beautifully...u dont need a thesaurus ..u have ur imagination and u write from the heart...that in essence is what blogging is all about i fell..
luv
amith
now u dnt have to miss the rain shooting star cause these days in mal'e hehe go out and have some fun in the rain tha what i do if i am not sick!!
"rain, lolly and perfume" try this theme. . . anyways this is an inspirational piece of work. you know rain evokes a lot of memories.
thats a beautiful post.. the most beautiful description i have read for ages.. you have got your own way with words :)
nice piece.
@ the last anonymous
i think i can do that theme in one sentence.
'i was walking down the road, sucking on a lolly when suddenly it started to rain and my precious perfume was washed away.'
hey shooty! remeber me cute risa well due to a problem i m ade a new blog so visit it soon and yeah now its ramazan dayxx + rainy days i lurv the cold rain it reminds me of sumone and my frndxx =)
It is certainly interesting for me to read this post. Thank you for it. I like such topics and everything connected to them. I definitely want to read more on that blog soon.
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