Watching you steal tiny breaths from this world..Eyes shut, pillow hugged adorably in the dark of desired dream..
Imaginable started to utter the distance and time
I urged for the moment my eyes craved your touch
To feel the breath and the mournfully desired
Your caressing body fused in me with joyous of adore
The tears of happiness revealing blood..
My hands tearing your body with bitten skin..
Pressures of love holding back the force of hurt
Gentleness making the space complete all inside
Fulfilled growls tendering the silent screams
Kissed to shut my voice and loosening of what i got
Motionfully cuddling hopes of the reality
Given surprise without the due of lateraling
Beholding trustfulness that went from yours to mine
In which i am still in the dreamt lightening divine
Heard wishes justified with faith lake
Staring at your kinded heart that only was awake..
| Well..this is my best written poem in 2008..(for me..i felt..) this poem could be new for my recent blogger friends..so thought why not sharing this..infact i wished this poem to be my first poem posted in 2009 ,so have a nice time with it.. |
16 comments:
hunnie ...= ) remembrance,,,, looaaabi.. = )
haadha salhi ey.. thats kewl dear.. i love it. :)
did i miss the poem there.. those signs! were they a poem..??
Frankly speaking i didn't understand.
cool one... nicely expressed :)
@Somebody: :)
@PemPeNeyNo AnEsThEyShiYa:Yay!! Glad that u loved it.. :)
@kunal :aww dear...the font i used before..it was "webding" that font is not viewable for some people..so it shows as some signs...anyhow..ive changed my font..specially for you :)
@anjelica :Thanku dear..glad you liked it..do keep on visiting..:)
:) sexy....
nice peom...
nice poem :)
Its the best one dear. I remember goin through it a couple of times. Bookmarked.
@sumbody yeah remembrance is what we do day and night, and its what all life is about.
Star. Hope to see lots of colorful meanful poems. Tc. §*
i love it!! its awesome =)
kewl one dear. very nice......
I have one - very important question... How do I split my words?.
*snickers*
Hey. Sorry I wasn't on much.
Thank you everyone... :)
@The Shadowrunner: ..u just have to "chuh" just divulge ur words(thoughts) from urself..hehe
..its ok dear..m not much arnd here either...:)
hehe..nice,,,,has a kewl meaning,,whoa,yea ,,no1 shud forget tat feelin..:p
since u have changed something something in this post now its visible and and its too good...
love th way u write things..
and thansk for changing it for me..
@devilsclone : which feeling :P haha..just kidding dear..
@kunal: No worries dear..n glad tht u love my writings ;)
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