As in the still life of the face of ocean..Seen through the glass of world..
In the corner of inspiration..
Stops the hearts for a split second..
As if its the scars beneath feet...
Opens the ocean's palace windows..
Here i lay in the unmade bed..
Against the tortured wind..
Vessel light reflecting upon me..
In the crooked shadows and eternal winds...
Timeless palms, ageless skies..
Drifting shadows, mired in shifting sands and water...
Seeing the sunset silhouette,as the colors of night fall...
Sky talking upon the gentleness of eyes..
Showing me the garden of winking stars..
Making me realise no shell could drift..
Rain of jewels dirtying on my windshield..
Locking every heart's door for what i was..
Once upon a reject waking the worms..
As the forever fortuitous bookmark in sand..
12 comments:
nyc work hunnie....
nice !!
wow!very unique shana!kyp up da good wrk.Is this really about the shell or...hehe
nice shana keep it up
so toin toin.. wordless... thoughtful... speechless... mean full... tc
nice work!!
@sumbody: thanku puppiees
@♥♥āphúя §hāfÿú♥♥:thankQ alpha
@Ishan:Its a connective thought of a shell with bits of feelings.. ;)thank u..
@maroonrose:thanks dear,Keep on visiting and i'd happily keep up my work ;)
@draconiams :close ur mouthy..toin toin ;)thanks
@swyt butterfly: Thanku Swyt butterfly..:)
WOW!!! awesome!!!
loved it sooooooooooooooo much. :)
u're 18!!! wow...that was deep and beautifully written...
and the titanic theme in the background is really nice...at least for this poem...
ps: blogrolled u.
Strange, I saw a shell really similar to that when I was visiting my island.
@Anonymous:Thanku :)
@Preetilata【ツ】:Glad tht u loved it soo much dear..thank u..keep on visiting;)
@everything burns:AWwww..ive blogrolled u too sweety...so happy that u liked it..theres no age for writing ryt...;)
@The Shadowrunner:Those types of shell do look beautiful ryt..hehe..
really...i wana go to an island too..:/ ..where there's a beach and perfect visible sky..with calmness without interference so i could sit n keep on writing...hehe
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